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March 29th, 2002, 08:54 PM
#1
Inactive Member
I want nothing but
your warmth
to blanket me
the beating of your heart
to fill my ears
your fragrance
to dance in my head
your taste, your texture
forever imprinted on my lips
I want nothing but
to tell you how I feel
and do justice to my emotions
and to listen to your thoughts
and to know you love me
I want nothing but
to hold you so close
and so warm
and to love you
I want nothing but
to know why
I can't find you
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March 30th, 2002, 02:38 PM
#2
Senior Hostboard Member
Nice work on this one. The end really kinda catches ya and holds you for a second before letting you go.
Good build-up, good ending I felt.
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April 2nd, 2002, 03:58 AM
#3
HB Forum Owner
it prompts me in ways i cannot begin to post on this board...
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April 3rd, 2002, 02:26 AM
#4
Inactive Member
Okay, you've gone and made me curious as to my prompting you, so now you have to either send me a private message through hoastboards, or e-mail them too me, or I'll wonder forever [img]biggrin.gif[/img]
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April 3rd, 2002, 06:17 AM
#5
Senior Hostboard Member
My guess, that whench be playin you like a fool.
She can't post on the board because you really don't...
oh forget it, your a big boy..
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April 3rd, 2002, 01:26 PM
#6
Inactive Member
so, i've never posted on this board before,
but . . . i really liked that poem.
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April 3rd, 2002, 02:47 PM
#7
Inactive Member
Well thanks dpbluc3. This was a poem that just felt good to write, felt good to get out there, ya know. No worries about never posting here before, all are welcome, unless Hanny turns into the message nazi [img]wink.gif[/img]
Keep dropping by, keep posting, and thanks for the comments. [img]biggrin.gif[/img]
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April 4th, 2002, 09:45 AM
#8
HB Forum Owner
well...
i WAS going to send ya that PM...
then i took a look at hanny's avatar and
remembered that he likes pickin pansies at
marvin's gardens.
it kinda turned me off.
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