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    Inactive Member Lunatic Fringe's Avatar
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    Talking

    I want nothing but
    your warmth
    to blanket me
    the beating of your heart
    to fill my ears
    your fragrance
    to dance in my head
    your taste, your texture
    forever imprinted on my lips

    I want nothing but
    to tell you how I feel
    and do justice to my emotions
    and to listen to your thoughts
    and to know you love me

    I want nothing but
    to hold you so close
    and so warm
    and to love you

    I want nothing but
    to know why
    I can't find you

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    Unhappy

    Nice work on this one. The end really kinda catches ya and holds you for a second before letting you go.
    Good build-up, good ending I felt.

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    it prompts me in ways i cannot begin to post on this board...

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    Inactive Member Lunatic Fringe's Avatar
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    Okay, you've gone and made me curious as to my prompting you, so now you have to either send me a private message through hoastboards, or e-mail them too me, or I'll wonder forever [img]biggrin.gif[/img]

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    Senior Hostboard Member Hannibal's Avatar
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    My guess, that whench be playin you like a fool.
    She can't post on the board because you really don't...
    oh forget it, your a big boy..

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    so, i've never posted on this board before,

    but . . . i really liked that poem.

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    Cool

    Well thanks dpbluc3. This was a poem that just felt good to write, felt good to get out there, ya know. No worries about never posting here before, all are welcome, unless Hanny turns into the message nazi [img]wink.gif[/img]
    Keep dropping by, keep posting, and thanks for the comments. [img]biggrin.gif[/img]

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    well...
    i WAS going to send ya that PM...

    then i took a look at hanny's avatar and
    remembered that he likes pickin pansies at
    marvin's gardens.

    it kinda turned me off.

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